Keeping
Up With the Joneses Part
Four Author’s note: In the previous chapters, Jonesy came back to the Fraynes’
residence to get the plow and fix Katie’s truck. He ends up making a good
impression on Katie, as well as making convincing Jim that he had Katie’s
best interests at heart. This is Jixemitri
Circle Writing Project #5. See the credits to find out what elements were
used. Chapter
9 August,
five years before “The Secret of the Mansion” Jonesy began spending a lot of time at
the Frayne farm. He never had any trouble finding an excuse to spend his
Saturdays there. He needed to replace the brake pads on the truck. He
repaired the house’s air conditioner. He packed up all of Win’s woodworking
tools to sell. Somehow, he always managed to get invited to dinner,
especially when Katie was serving her homemade pecan pie for dessert. His relationship with Jim was still
strained. Both were trying to keep their deal, although for different
reasons. Jim knew his mother needed assistance. He wanted to live up to his
father’s last request, and he knew he needed help to do that. As much as Jim
hated Jonesy, he knew Jonesy truly cared about his mother. Jonesy, while
coarse and demeaning to Jim, always treated Katie respectfully and even
tenderly. He was knowledgeable about repairs and seemed more willing to help
Katie any way he could. Jonesy’s reasons for keeping the deal
were not quite as altruistic. He knew Katie would not like his “teasing” of
Jim. He personally thought he was helping the boy grow up and become a
well-adjusted male. After all, he’d endured similar treatment, and look how
he turned out. It was a rite of passage. Katie, however, might not see it
this way and Jonesy didn’t want to hinder his chances with her. He knew if he
wanted to marry Katie, he had to appear interested in being a “good role
model” for Jim. Katie was still a long way from accepting a marriage
proposal. He knew his best chance was to capitalize on Jim’s need for a
father and his role as a good provider. That particular day he spent helping the
Fraynes pack their belongings in boxes. Next Saturday Katie and Jim were
moving to their new apartment. Currently, they were working in Win’s old
study. Packing her husband’s possessions was making Katie sentimental. She
told several stories, emphasizing her husband’s accomplishments and talents.
Listening to Katie talk about Win made Jonesy ill, but he knew he had to
endure it. Katie stared down at an old family photo,
her eyes full of love. “Oh, Jimmy. You look just like your dad. He was so
handsome.” She ruffled Jim’s red hair. “Just like his son.” “Mom!” Jim protested with a grin.
Normally, he didn’t mind when his mother did that, but he didn’t want Jonesy
to tease him about it later. He sensed that the older man was brooding about
something. Jonesy was brooding. He was
growing increasingly more tired of the talk about Win. The insecurities of
his youth were coming back to haunt him. Once again, he felt consumed with
feelings of inadequacy. Could he ever measure up to the dead man in the
picture? Every time he looked at Jim, he was reminded of Katie’s perfect late
husband. Still, Jonesy was on his best behavior.
He bit his tongue many times when he had wanted to say something nasty to
Jim. He had arrived at their house that morning and dutifully helped Katie
pack. Jonesy had never been so domestic in his entire life. If the guys at the bar could see me wrapping up this junk in
bubble paper, I’d be ruined. He shuddered at the thought as he carefully
wrapped an autographed picture of John Wayne that Win had acquired at an
auction. “Thanks for helping us, Jonesy,” Katie
said, smiling shyly at him. “I didn’t think we’d ever get all this packed.
You’ve been a big help today.” “No
problem.” Her smile strengthened his resolve to make this woman his. Hope
welled within him that his plan was working.
“Look at this, Jim!” Katie exclaimed. She
reached up and pulled something silver from the top shelf of Win’s bookcase.
“It’s your christening cup from Uncle James.” She gently rubbed the mug,
trying to remove some of the tarnish. “A little polish and this will shine
like new.” Jim
took the cup and studied it. “So, Uncle James got this for me?” “Yes. He brought it when he came to see you
for the first time. He was so proud that we had named you after him. That’s
why he’s giving you such a large inheritance after he passes away.” “I’d
rather get to know him while he’s alive,” Jim remarked. “As far as I’m
concerned, he can keep his old money.” Katie sighed. “Your uncle is a stubborn
man, Jimmy. It’s probably too late to reconcile with him. I’m just thankful
that, with this inheritance, you’ll be able to go to college.” “If Uncle James is so stubborn, how do
you know he won’t give his money to someone else?” Jim argued, mostly for the
sake of arguing. “Because
he doesn’t have anyone else to give it to,” Katie answered. “You’re all the
family he has left.” Jim put down the mug, and Jonesy
nonchalantly picked it up. He studied the cup’s fine craftsmanship and the
delicate inscription. James Winthrop Frayne II. Looks expensive. Very
expensive, Jonesy thought to himself. Wonder how big an inheritance
Jimmy boy has coming to him? He put the cup down before Katie noticed. He needn’t have worried. Katie was too
busy exploring memory lane to pay attention to him. Smiling sadly, she held
the family photo album out to Jim. “You may want to look at this, son. I
don’t know if you’ve ever seen these pictures before.” Jim took the book and flipped through the
pages. Feeling Jonesy’s brooding gaze upon him, he looked up and noticed the
older man’s sullen expression. Something about it made him nervous. “Maybe we can look at it later, Mom,” Jim
said nervously. As he handed the album back to his mother, a piece of paper
fell out and fluttered to the floor. He picked it up and opened it. “Look,
Mom! It’s your wedding announcement!” Katie took the piece of paper. She smiled
as she read it. “I wondered where that was. Your dad said he put it in a safe
place. I should’ve known it would be here.” Her smile turned wistful as
memories of her wedding day filled her mind. Since neither of them had a
large family, she and Win had had a small wedding. Her mother and father were
getting ready to move back to Holland, so there hadn’t been time to plan an
elaborate ceremony and reception. She had worn her mother’s
gown. It was ecru silk organdy and had an embroidered, raised-edge neckline
and a raised, piped-edge waist seam. The ¾ length sleeves were sheer with
ruffled cuffs, and they had roses embroidered on them. The skirt, a formal
sweep with a ruffled hem, fell to the ground and swished around her feet. It
was beautiful, and if she could’ve chosen any gown in the whole world, she would’ve
picked that very dress. The clearest memory she had
of the wedding was of Win’s face as her father led her down the aisle. He had
love written all over his face. Win had told her later that she almost
floated to him. When they exchanged their vows, Katie had to blink back tears; she still
meant every word. Richer or poorer, better or worse, till death do we part… The ceremony had passed
quickly. At the reception the band played “their” song as the couple shared
their first dance. “Could I Have This Dance” had played on the radio during
their first date, and Win had sung it to her.
While they danced as husband and wife, Katie had never been happier.
She snuggled closer in his embrace, looking up at him tenderly. “So,
where are we going on our honeymoon?” she whispered. “Oh,
I thought I might take you to the drive-in and see the original King Kong.” Katie
had smirked up at him, only antagonizing him to tease her more. “Well, if that isn’t romantic
enough, maybe I can throw a blanket in the backseat of the car and find a
nice, secluded spot in Central Park, and then we could…Ooof!” His teasing had
been interrupted by a quick punch in the gut. “I can’t tell you. It’s a
secret.” “A
secret, huh?” Katie raised an eyebrow. “Now I’m really interested.”
“Patience,
Katje Vanderheiden. Patience,” Win murmured as he kissed the end of her nose. Katie sniffed indignantly.
“I’ll have you know, Mr. Frayne, that my name is Katje Frayne. I
don’t think my husband would appreciate you calling me by my maiden name.” “A
thousand apologies, Mrs. Frayne. Do you think your
husband would mind if I kissed you?” Katie
had giggled and raised her lips to his. “Not at all, Mr. Frayne.” “Mom!”
Jim’s voice brought Katie back to the present. “Where do you want me to put
this?” He was holding the album out to her. Katie
shook her head, trying to clear her thoughts. “Just lay it on the desk,
Jimmy. We’ll look at it together later.” Jim
only nodded at his mom. He noticed her cheeks were flushed and she seemed
short of breath. “Are
you feeling all right, Mom?” he asked, laying a freckled hand on her cheek.
“You look kind of pale.” “I’m fine, son. Just a little tired from
all this packing.” She picked up a picture of herself from Win’s desk to
wrap. Suddenly, there was a thud and the sound of shattering glass as Katie
fell to the floor. Blood dripped from her hand where she’d cut herself. Both
Jim and Jonesy were at her side in an instant. Jonesy led her to a chair so
she could sit down. Worried, Jim hovered at his mother’s side as Jonesy
carefully picked up the broken glass. “Are
you all right, Mom?” Tears filled Jim’s eyes. Not Mom too! he pleaded silently. Please, take me
instead of her! Katie
tried to stand up but couldn’t. “I just got a little dizzy. I’m fine, Jim.” “But you
passed out, Mom! We need to take you to a doctor!” “Katie, you do need to see a doctor,”
Jonesy said, examining her carefully. “Even if it was just a dizzy spell from
working too hard, you have a nasty cut on yer hand from the glass in that
picture. You probably need stitches.” “You don’t understand,” Katie protested
weakly. “We don’t have any insurance. And money isn’t exactly plentiful
either.” She tried to get up, but couldn’t find the strength. “I’ll be fine.” Katie’s protests abruptly ended, however,
as Jonesy picked her up in his arms. “You need to go to the hospital, Katie,
and that’s final. Don’t worry about the cost. I’ll take care of it myself.” Jim followed Jonesy to his truck. For
once the weatherman’s predictions were accurate; as forecast it was starting
to storm. Jonesy’s truck had a large
crew cab, so he was able to lay Katie in the backseat. “Get
in the front with me, boy, before you get drenched out here!” For
once, Jim obeyed without questioning. “Yer ma’ll be more comfortable back there,”
Jonesy explained as he pulled onto the main road. “Now, which way to the
nearest hospital?” Forcing himself to remain calm, Jim gave
directions to the hospital. The pair didn’t talk much during the half-hour
trip. Their former squabbles were inconsequential at the moment; their common
love for Katie put things into perspective. For all his faults, Jonesy was a good
driver. The late-model Ford F-250 Super Duty had a lot of power, and he was
able to get there quickly. The tires squealed as he turned into the
hospital’s emergency entrance and slammed the truck on the corner. He ignored the hissing sound of air leaking
from his tire as he gathered Katie in his arms and ran into the hospital. Jim
was following close behind. Jonesy gave the receptionist at the desk all the
necessary financial information, while a nurse led Katie and Jim to the
back. Once he’d finished filling out the
paperwork for billing, there was nothing left for Jonesy to do but worry.
Nervous about what was wrong with Katie, he twiddled his thumbs as he sat in
the appropriately named “waiting” room. He finally grabbed a magazine to
occupy his time. Jim
returned to the waiting room and sat down with a huff in a seat across from
Jonesy. “What’s
wrong with you?” Jonesy demanded. Jim scowled.
“They wouldn’t let me stay in there with her.” “Well,
it ain’t gonna kill you to stay in here with me.” “It’s
not that,” Jim argued. “I need to be in there to take care of her.” Jim’s obvious love for his mother caused
a brief lapse in Jonesy’s cynical attitude. His expression softened slightly
as he tried to comfort the boy. “Look kid, the doctor knows best. I know you
wanna take care of yer ma, but she’ll be okay. Is she gettin’ any help back
there?” “They aren’t busy, so they already put Mom in an examining
room,” Jim answered. “Our family doctor is the attending physician on call,
so he has our medical records.” Jonesy
nodded and continued looking at his magazine. “I
don’t know what I would’ve done if you weren’t there with us. Thanks for bringing
her,” Jim whispered. Jonesy lowered his magazine to look over
at the boy. It was obvious that the words had been hard to say, but that the
thank-you was heartfelt. “Yer welcome, kid,” he answered gruffly.
“I may not like you much, but I really do care about yer ma.” He looked out
the window. “Well, I better get out there and change that tire now that the
rain’s slacking off.” Worried that he was getting soft, Jonesy
hopped up from his chair and bounded out the door, leaving Jim alone. If he
sat there any longer, he’d end up holding the kid’s hand. Chapter
Ten One size fits all!
Katie thought in exasperation, studying the hospital gown she wore. How
about one size fits none. The nurse had already been in and checked
her blood pressure, weight, temperature, and all those other things that only
wasted time until the doctor graced the patient with his presence. She was
thankful that their family doctor was on call in the emergency room. She’d
feel more comfortable dealing with him than a stranger. There was a brusque knock at the door and
Dr. Phillips entered. He was a large man with a thick shock of graying hair.
He had kind brown eyes that almost seemed to have the power to diagnose with
a mere glance. He’d treated the Frayne family for years and knew of Win’s
recent death. He’d attended the funeral, and had even sent them a fruit
basket. “So,
Katie, what’s the problem today?” He looked over her chart. “I’m not really sure, doctor. I felt a
bit faint, and the next thing I knew, I was on the floor. When I fell I broke
a picture, and a piece of glass cut my hand.” The kindly doctor examined the cut. “Hmm.
Looks like it might need a few stitches.” He put down her hand and turned his
attention to her face, taking note of the paleness of her skin and the dark
circles under her eyes. “So, do you know of any reason you would faint?” Katie
shrugged. “I’ve been doing a lot of packing. It was probably exhaustion.” “You’re
moving?” “Yes, I have to sell the house. I can’t
make the payments,” she answered, tears welling in her eyes. “Jim and I are
moving to an apartment next week. It’s been stressful making all the
arrangements.” “Have
you been sleeping well?” “Not
really,” Katie admitted. “It’s so hard to sleep without Win in bed beside
me.” Doctor Phillips studied her chart. “I see
you’ve lost a few pounds since your last visit.” “I
guess so. I haven’t had much of an appetite lately.” “Any other symptoms?” Katie hesitated for a moment, and then
whispered, “I have been having a
few chest pains.” “How often?” The doctor began furiously
scribbling something down in her chart. “Not very often. I’ve only had a few.” “Like when you worry,” the doctor
suggested. “Or maybe when you’ve been thinking about Win?” Katie
nodded. “You had a complete physical a few months
before Win died, and according to it, you were healthy as a horse. A bit too
skinny, in my opinion, but healthy nonetheless. I can order some new tests to see if
anything turns up, but in my professional opinion, I think you are suffering
from extreme grief.” “Grief?”
Katie repeated. “Can that cause these particular symptoms?” The doctor nodded and took her hand.
“Katie, I’m going to be totally honest with you. You’ve lost a lot of weight,
which you shouldn’t have lost in the first place. You’re not sleeping. You’re
working too hard. Now you’re having chest pains and passing out. If you
aren’t careful, you’re going to grieve yourself to death.” Katie
gasped. “Nothing can happen to me, doctor! What would Jim do if I died? There’s
no one to take care of him!” Dr. Phillips patted her arm. “Now, don’t
start worrying about that. I’m going to write a prescription for you for a
mild sleeping pill. It should help you sleep at night. Be sure you read all
the directions before you take them. I’m going to call this in at the
pharmacy, and then I’ll be back in here to stitch up that hand. Make sure
that you come back if you have any more of those chest pains.” The doctor left the room and went to the
nurse’s station in the waiting room. He whispered some directions to the
nurse who’d checked in Katie. Jim saw Dr. Phillips and ran over to him. “Dr.
Phillips! How’s my mom? Will she be okay?” The doctor put a kindly arm around the
boy’s shoulders. “She’ll be fine, Jim. We’re going to put a few stitches in
her hand, and I’m giving her a prescription to help her sleep.” “Is
there anything I can do to help her?” “Jim, your mother is suffering from a
severe form of grief. As you know, she loved your father deeply. Her physical
health is being affected by her emotional turmoil. She’s had a few chest
pains that I’m worried about, so you need to try not to upset her. Help her
out as much as you can.” “Chest pains?” Jim started to tremble. He
knew some kids at school whose parents had died from heart attacks. “Does she need to have surgery or
anything?” The doctor smiled. “Unfortunately, that’s
one operation I can’t do. There’s nothing we doctors can do for a broken
heart. Surgery can’t fix it. You just help her with things around the house
and, most important of all, try not to worry her needlessly.” “I
can’t lose her, Dr. Phillips,” Jim murmured. “She’s all I have left.” “I’m sure she will be fine, Jim,” he said
reassuringly. “Now I need to go see about her hand. She’ll be out in a few
minutes, okay?” The doctor walked away down the hall. Suddenly, he turned
back to Jim and called, “You keep an eye on her and make sure she comes in if
she has any more pains. And remember, try not to worry her.” Jim nodded and hung his head sadly. He
felt the weight of the world on his young shoulders and a helplessness in his
soul. Something was wrong with his mother’s heart, and he had no idea how to
fix it. How
do you heal a broken heart? he
wondered. Sadly, he realized that the only person who could
mend his mother’s heart had already gone to heaven. And although Jonesy was
trying awfully hard to get the job done, he wasn’t making any progress at
all. Chapter
Eleven Jonesy had played the part of a diligent
family man. He’d waited patiently at the hospital until Katie was released,
and then he’d gone to the pharmacy to fill her prescription. When they’d
arrived at the house, he helped her inside. He promised that some
acquaintances of his who moved furniture would be there the next week to
finish packing. He ordered Katie to take it easy and let them take care of
everything. Then he gently persuaded
her to go up to her room and rest. She
tearfully thanked him as he helped her climb the stairs to her bedroom. Without a word to Jim, Jonesy walked back
down the stairs and out the front door. Jim followed after him. As much as
Jim detested the man, Jonesy had helped their family that day.
Gathering up his courage and biting back his animosity, Jim called out
Jonesy’s name. “Thanks for all your help today,” he said
solemnly when Jonesy turned to face him. “I don’t know what I would’ve done
if you hadn’t been here.” Jonesy’s stony expression softened
momentarily. “Like I told you earlier, kid, I did it for yer ma. I really do
care about her, you know. Reluctantly, Jim nodded. “Yeah, I know
you do.” “You take care of her,” Jonesy ordered.
“Don’t you be worryin’ her none. You heard what the doctor said.” “I won’t. Dr. Phillips talked to me at
the hospital. He told me not to worry her, and I won’t.” Jim looked at his feet
sadly. “I’m really scared.” For a split second, Jonesy almost felt
sorry for the boy. He quickly dismissed that feeling from his mind. “She’ll
be fine. She’s just worn out and has a bad cut on her hand.” “The doctor said she has a broken heart.” Jonesy chuckled in disbelief. “That’s a
bunch of bunk, kid. Yer ma’ll be fine after she gets some rest.” The fire returned to Jim’s green eyes.
“I’m not lying,” he insisted. “When
I talked to the doctor, he told me that Mom was sick because she misses my dad.” “That’s foolishness! This is the real
world and not some fairy tale!” Jonesy sputtered. “It is not! My parents had a love for
each other that you’ll never understand!” “What yer ma needs is a real man to take
her mind offa yer dead daddy!” Jim stared at Jonesy in disbelief. He
couldn’t believe what a monster this man was. He wanted to lash out at Jonesy
and hit him as hard as a boy his age could. Somehow, he controlled his
redheaded temper and looked coldly at Jonesy.
“My mother will never love anyone the way she loved my father. Especially
somebody like you. I appreciate what you did for us tonight, but you’ll never
be like my father.” Jonesy angrily stalked over to Jim. I
hate Win Frayne and I hate his kid! He balled up his fist, intent on punching
the boy, but something stopped him. I’m not going to let this brat get to
me! Katie will be my wife
and she will love me! I can
make her forget about Win and fall in love with me! “You better watch yerself, little prince,”
he growled in Jim’s ear. “Someday the little crown prince won’t have his
loyal subjects around to take care of him.”
Then Jonesy strode to his truck, got inside, and spun out of the
driveway. This evening he’d almost let his guard down and let Jim inside.
He’d never make that mistake again. From now on, he and Jim were enemies. No
more trying. It was better that way for everyone. Credits This has been
a Jixemitri CWP #5.
Elements included are a see-crud (Win’s honeymoon surprise), pecan pie
(Katie’s), auction (Win purchased John Wayne picture at one), King Kong (Win
teased Katie about seeing it on their honeymoon), changing a tire (Jonesy
changed one at the hospital), shattered glass (broken picture), a missing
personal paper (Win and Katie’s wedding announcement), a storm (rainstorm on
the way to the hospital), a broken heart (what Katie is suffering from),
Could I Have This Dance? (song played at Win and Katie’s wedding), and the
carry-over item was from #1 sex in a park (Win teasing Katie about honeymoon
plans). A huge thank you to my editors, Kaye,
Kathy, and Lori D! You ladies are the absolute best! I would have made a
majorly bad boo-boo if it had not been for one of my astute editors. I would
have gotten the bad KK award of the year! |